I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Bonjur Jayden I like how you did a slide show it was very interesting.Maybe next time you could add a blurb and a bit more information. I really liked how you put more then one examples.
Hi Jayden I really like how you made it easy to read and kept it really simple but you added in all the info you needed.Also i liked that you added in examples of you and Tyson. Maybe next time try and make it more eye catching by adding pictures.
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Hi Jayden this is really interesting and I really enjoyed it. I like how you did it in a slide.
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Bonjur Jayden I like how you did a slide show it was very interesting.Maybe next time you could add a blurb and a bit more information. I really liked how you put more then one examples.
ReplyDeleteHi Jayden I really like how you made it easy to read and kept it really simple but you added in all the info you needed.Also i liked that you added in examples of you and Tyson. Maybe next time try and make it more eye catching by adding pictures.
ReplyDeleteThanks Lucy I will make it more eye catching by adding pictures.
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