chrismas around the world

we have read about chrismas in different countries we leaned how to say happy chrismas in different languages like Japannese and sweden and some foods in different countries like in sweden they have rice puding and that is what santa eat's.

We have bean learning how to write a opinon so we read some books. Then we had to pick one to write an opinon about. 

Can you please give me fedback about my writing.

The pigeon and the walrus!!

In my opinion the book the Pigeon wants a walrus.

My opinion is that the pigeon should get a walrus. Because he can become friends with the walrus so the pigeon can play with him

So he can stay up late and drive the bus

whenever he wants And he can ride the

the walrus into the sunset.

Last of all! He should get a walrus

but he will have to look after it and pay for the food, so he will have to get a job.