I look in the mirror and what do I see?
A peaceful, joyous, appreciative person looking back at me.
(fill in three traits)
I’m really good at
Hokey, swimming, climbing.
(something you are good at)
and love to spend time with my bird.
(something you love to do)
I spend lots of time
taming my bird
(something you spend a lot of time doing)
and can’t wait for the end of school.
(something you are looking forward to and
rhymes with last word in the “love to do” line)
I could improve my writing skills
(something you could do better)
writing is hard for me,
(something hard for you to do)
but I know if I try, I’ll be the best I can be.
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I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia ora Hayden, well done on the poem, it tells me a lot about you. It would look better of you took the instructions out and had added a picture. What kind of bird do you have?
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