The amazing view

this was a story about a picture of an island and this is what I came up with and in the comments tell me the best paragraph.     

As I view the mountains the clear sky shining with beautiful sunbeams makes me grin. With a turn of my head, the shocking view of the deep ocean filled me with delight. as I looked down the clean bushes made me satisfied. As I looked again and took it all in my face lightened up with glee.

As I leave my room I breathe in the lovely air when I hear my name. Jake Jackson come down here as I went down to say hello I was greeted with some pancakes my favourite. after the pancakes, I went for a swim the best thing to do in this amazing sun but a beached shark laying on the beach.

as I ran and got a wet towel the shark started to struggle. When the towels were on it started to relax until we started to push. It got irritated and tried to wriggle away but the in-progress it slipped and made it easy it push. when it had got to the water it had peacefully raced away.

when I woke up I heard the voice kids saying it's back but. this time I had to go to work I put the towels back on left it there. went to work and hoped they had it under control. I heard on the radio a shark had died but the radio stopped. and never knew if it was the same one.