I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
I like how you said I remember feeling ice cream dripping down my hand. maybe next time you can re read it. I did a that was summer poem to maybe sometime you can look at mine.
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I like how you said I remember feeling ice cream dripping down my hand. maybe next time you can re read it. I did a that was summer poem to maybe sometime you can look at mine.
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