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Friday, 17 March 2017

samoa sandwich and sushi

    samoa Sandwich and sushi



I will Never a eat Sushi sweatpants


I will Never wear Science sunglasses
I will Never buy Samoan Sunblock
I will Never do a game of spotlight with south hornby school
I will Never go to sweden to get a sandwich.


I like to think about snails and Silverbeet.
And I promise I will Never smack a sandworm so the small sunday doesn't smile.

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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous7 April 2017 at 10:28

    Hi Jayden,
    I like how you have said things you would do and won't do.
    Maybe next time you could add pictures and some colour.
    I like reading your story jayden it was very interesting.

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  2. Anonymous20 June 2017 at 12:45

    Hi Jayden My name is Dion and I'm a year 6 student at St.Bernadette's Primary School. I liked how you made the title colorful and bright. Maybe next time you could check your work for punctuation because on your title you didn't add capital letters like in the Samoan one. I am looking forward to seeing more work from you Jayden.

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