I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Jayden well done on finding lots of great artists through the decades. You have also found many great images of these decades and linked songs to your slideshow. It would have been helpful if you'd listed the different genres and instruments used in different decades, and you also could have listed more hit songs. It's great to see you completing tasks and posting these on your blog. Keep working hard. Mrs Hastie
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Hi Jayden well done on finding lots of great artists through the decades. You have also found many great images of these decades and linked songs to your slideshow. It would have been helpful if you'd listed the different genres and instruments used in different decades, and you also could have listed more hit songs. It's great to see you completing tasks and posting these on your blog. Keep working hard. Mrs Hastie
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