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Thursday, 19 October 2017

new school poem

18-10-17  


When I walk around the school without a doubt I love it


When I smell the new fresh air I know I am lucky


When I hear the birds in the trees I feel good

I feel that we should be grateful




we just moved school and this is my poem for the school we had to use see hear feel and touch. mean all of the sentences please comment.

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