I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Jayden my name is Deakyn, and I'm from Awahono School. I really like the details you've put in for the dark clouds in the background. How long did it take you to draw the rain? It made me think of a stormy and rainy day when it nearly flooded. Have you thought about adding in some lightning for` your drawing? Maybe you could visit my blog? From Deakyn
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Hi Jayden my name is Alex and I'm from Awahono School. I really like the colour of the rainbow and it makes me think of a rainy day.
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment it really made me smile ;)
DeleteHi Jayden my name is Deakyn, and I'm from Awahono School. I really like the details you've put in for the dark clouds in the background. How long did it take you to draw the rain? It made me think of a stormy and rainy day when it nearly flooded. Have you thought about adding in some lightning for` your drawing? Maybe you could visit my blog? From Deakyn
ReplyDeleteThanks so much That comment. It was the best comment I have ever seen and can you give me more fedback thanks and I will go on your blog.
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